Slimming down

DPSResume.tex

@@ -161,10 +161,9 @@ Hopkins, MN & 2013 - 2016 (\diffdates{2013}{06}{01}{2016}{12}{9}) \\
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-  \item Lead small (3-5 person) team to retool and support a migration system in preperation of an extended cutover testing period.
-  \item Architected a Python web application to faciliate the integration of an Oracle data source with a new suite of back, middle and front office tools.
-  \item Refatored a Spring web application to use the latest version of JQuery, rewriting custom plugins, and re-organizing the structure to comply with modern standards.
-  \item Redesigned a system that manages '\emph{Risk Products}' to give improved control over the individual components.
+  \item Lead a small (3-5 person) team to retool and support a migration system in preperation of an extended cutover testing period.
+  \item Architected a Python REST API to integrate an Oracle data source with a thirdparty suite of back, middle and front office tools.
+  \item Redesigned management system for '\emph{Risk Products}', delivering improved control over the individual components.
   \item Maintained/upgraded a 10+ year Spring web application. Modernized interface, improved the back end, started work to move to modern build tools/process. 
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@@ -177,7 +176,7 @@ Mankato, MN & 2011 - 2013 (\diffdates{2011}{04}{01}{2013}{05}{03}) \\
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   \item Expanded a REST API and implemented continuous integration testing.
   \item Developed a DSL and tooling for internal verification, testing and reporting, and auditing.
-  \item Developed a '\emph{playback}' system that enabled '\emph{re-playing}' data for duplication and debugging of client systems. 
+  \item Developed a '\emph{playback}' system that enabled accurate debugging of custom client systems. 
   \item Quality assurance, code coverage and regression unit testing. 
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